We Asked Too Much From God by Marian Godfrey

The Victoria writer is on the 2024 CBC Short Story Prize longlist

Image | Marian Godfrey

Caption: Marian Godfrey is a writer and visual artist living in Victoria. (Negative Nancy)

Marian Godfrey has made the 2024 CBC Short Story Prize longlist for We Asked Too Much From God.
The winner of the 2024 CBC Short Story Prize will receive $6,000 from the Canada Council for the Arts(external link), have their work published on CBC Books(external link) and attend a two-week writing residency at Banff Centre for Arts and Creativity(external link). The four remaining finalists will each receive $1,000 from the Canada Council for the Arts(external link) and have their work published on CBC Books(external link).
The shortlist will be announced on April 18 and the winner will be announced on April 25.
If you're interested in the CBC Literary Prizes(external link), the 2024 CBC Poetry Prize is open for submissions until June 1. The 2025 CBC Short Story Prize will open in September and the 2025 CBC Nonfiction Prize will open in January.

About Marian Godfrey

Marian Godfrey lives on unceded Lkwungen territory, home of the Songhees and Esquimalt peoples (Victoria). She is a visual artist who works with watercolour, ink, oils and textiles. She has a BA in psychology and English literature from the University of Lethbridge. She is currently working on a novel by the same name (We Asked Too Much from God) as well as a graphic memoir about a quest towards motherhood. She lives with her son, Henry.

Entry in five-ish words

"Girl questions God amid crisis."

The story's source of inspiration

"This story is based on some of my own experiences growing up in Southern Alberta in the 1980s and 1990s. They are excerpts from my manuscript that have been adapted to short story."

First lines

We moved into the townhouse on the far West side of Lethbridge in 1983, when I was still a baby and was too young to know what we'd just lost. I loved playing in our neighbourhood. Our greatest neighbours were the fields that open where the developments end. Every night the sun said goodbye to us last.

Image | CBC Short Story Prize

Caption: The 2024 CBC Short Story Prize shortlist will be announced on April 18 and the winner will be announced on April 25. (Ben Shannon/CBC)

Check out the rest of the longlist

The longlist was selected from more than 1,900 submissions. A team of 12 writers and editors from across Canada compiled the list.
The jury selects the shortlist and the eventual winner from the readers' longlisted selections. This year's jury is comprised of Suzette Mayr, Kevin Chong and Ashley Audrain.
The complete longlist is: